Lots of people have been commenting on the blog and it’s looking fantastic. To make the blog even better, remember to add punctuation:
hi mrs palmer I love your writing especially the part where he found the secret door it was exciting from mr mccann
Can you spot all the mistakes? 😯
Hi Mrs Palmer. I love your writing, especially the part where he found the secret door. It was very exciting! From Mr McCann
Much better! 😎
Pink and Green
Also remember to say something positive (this is always pink in our books) and something they can improve on (green in the books). You might notice that teachers will use ‘Mr Green’ when they give their next steps for children.
Well done Mrs Palmer! I really liked your description of the fantasy setting. I particularly liked how you used a similes to say ‘as dark as the night sky’. Next time, try to group your writing into paragraphs. From Mr McCann
If you are adding work to the blog, don’t add smileys. If you are commenting on someone’s writing, then smileys are great to show people what you think of their writing! Remember, only use one smiley for each comment.
Hi Mrs Palmer. I love your writing, especially the part where he found the secret door. It was very exciting! 😆 From Mr McCann
Finally, here’s a table to show you all of the different smileys that you can make.
I hope your find all of this information useful.
From Mr McCann